Thursday, February 14, 2008

Happy Birthday!!







If I told you a girl, whose smile’s like a riff
Short sweet rhythmic and yet stiff
It sways you of your feet and lands you on the moon,
You think you are the king of the world
and yet, no better than a loon….

When sighted from a distance you ponder
Is it me or is it someone else yonder,
Who got the coveted prize of a resplendent smile,
one that resembles a star spangled sky on a moonless night
courteous coaxing carefree coy makes you forget the world defile……

a smile that can be as inviting as a lemon tart
and yet can be colder than the devils heart
a smile that has the power to hale and heal,
the might to melt a despot, dethrone a tyrant, dreck a diamond
dimples that demean your demeanor, a shimmer so surreal…..

dazzling, snazzy, gleaming, beaming,
a twinkle, a glimmer, a spangle, a shimmer,
a glint, a sheen, dazzles umpteen,
scintillatingly phosphorescent, radiant and fulgurant
as transparent as a raindrop, of effeminate charisma
yet shrouded with mystery, a perplexing enigma


like the warmth disseminated by a smoldering hearth
like the fragrant whiff of raindrops caressing the parched earth
like the waves that moisten your face as they crash ashore
like listening the giggles of someone you adore
like the sunshine glistering through the autumn trees
like unfolding an ancient map, all yellow and creased
like finding loose change in an old pair of jeans
like discovering a picture of your parents in their teens
like the gentle touch of a swaying feather
a smile that’s more than all of this put together…..



12 comments:

Pallav said...

hey guys...
heres somethin for all u ppl jobless enuff to cmmnt on my blog...the title of d blog is basically a pseudonym....
the actual title and identity of the person are hidden in there somewhere...so brainstorm ppl!!!

shrill said...

dude!
amazing,sweet rhythmic,scintillating poetry!!too good!!
sad ppl arent commenting here..
neways if ppl are deprived of so good
a piece of poetry...its their loss!!
waiting fr more stuffs on ur blog..
keep blogging!!

Anonymous said...

saale badi romantic poem likhne laga hai..college jaaake devdaas ban gaya, kounh ai ye chokri??
aur itne lambe words kahan se utha k maare hai??lolz, neways gud work..

Unknown said...

its was vry nice 2 expressive n like a sweet dream keep it up lots of lv ur sis bye

Bnits said...

very gr8 work baccha!!!
i m proud of u!!
keep it up!!!
bahut bahut accha hai!!
1 can actually feel every expressions u used & relate to her dream girl!!!!!

m really proud!!
LOVE U
UR BIG BRO!!

vivek's....... said...

good job...great rym....enough words to force me open the dictionary....yo!!!!

Pallav said...
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garrett said...

KYA GAJJAB POEM HAI BOSS....BRILLIANT......loads of talent...keep rolling........

Anonymous said...

i nevr knew u cud write such stuff....awesome comparisons of d smile....this smile seems to b imaginary but agar kisi ki hai sach mein..then she is really fortunate to receive such a beautiful compliment...but it was too heavy for me..dictionary dekhna pada....brilliant stuff...plzzzz keep writin...dont wrry 4 commments....they must b ur judgin parametr..ur skills r far too superior....great goin...keep wrtin.....

Anonymous said...

srry..i meant that they must not b ur judgin parametr...

Sajal Ehsaas said...

great work.....aur brainstorm ke liye hint deke to tumne kaam asaan kar diyaa mera....sweet words about a really sweet person.....vaise bhi poetry mein jab kuchh "abstract" sa ho to uska 'kaavy-saundarya' bahut badh jaata hai....is work ne bahut hi zyaada impress kiyaa mujhe....keep up the great work.......
and ya......Madhubal is THE Ultimate Beauty....no doubt about it...dekh le usko benaqab agar,chaand bhi sharmsaar ho jaaye.....

Anonymous said...

a beautiful poem....closely knitting the charismatic attributes of miss X.....well u gave enough hints.....so the variable X can surely b substitutd wid a value...wanna me to do the honours...kinda great at maths.......great piece of art!!